Challenge 16: “Today, I challenge you to write a poem that uses the form of a list to defamiliarize the mundane.”
Poetry is what happens when nothing else can.
Charles Bukowski
Don’t you like the sound of that? This can be everything! I loved something else from today’s prompt: one sentence that I made into the title of this post and my poem. Thank you!
The poem is a cento. If you don’t know what it means, try to see if there is anything familiar about certain lines. All will not be familiar to all but read carefully. You never know…
Art likes to make more of itself There is no point to this poem. 1 I would like to walk around in a small coat of words 2 through the meadows where no grass has ever grown. 3 I keep forgetting what a tired country this is. 4 Worms worm, seeds sowing. 5 When you go back to your home town you realize you no longer have one. 6 You complain to the photos, but it doesn’t matter. 7 There is not a single spot in this world that still deserves to be called peaceful. 8 It is the hour when from the boughs Union beer’s high note is heard. 9 Everything is broken up and dances. 10 Even now, in the blues, there is a beauty and options. 11 People have lived here for 6000 years. At the beginning, women ruled. 12 I could feel waves of hatred and I was confused. 13 I wait for the return of conversation. 14 Don’t wait for the want. Just do and be gentle. 15 Wear a mask which exactly resembles your face. 16 I know too much and not enough 17 to wear red lipstick but not a bra. 18 I’d give myself one more day with you, 19 the known positions in which familiar lovers arrange their limbs, to sleep. 20 We are glad that we are not trees for in that case we could not be as close. 21 A perfectly obvious deception: 22 The coward does it with a kiss, the brave man with a sword! 23 Willie waters the world, 24 cold water cascades over. 25 “Look, Mon Cheri, it’s your friend!” 26 Bummer, you have a black curl. Bummer, it’s a girl. 27 The horse knew well why he got scared. 28 We leave when we die. Until then there is work to do. 29 I’ve taken to rearranging books on the shelf. 30 I have six really good poems. I hope I will write more of them. 31 I wish to eat cake every day. 32 And hope felt strong, and life itself not weak. 33 Wish you were here moving mountains with me. 34 Thank you for stopping here to see me at home in my home. 35
And now a big reveal: This poem is entirely made up of words by 35 other people! Some of them you have studied, others not unless you are Slovenian because they are local. Some are family (father, mother, uncle), some are friends and followers, and a special surprise: nine of them are you, NaPoWriMo participants, the ones who gel with my perception of what poetry is the most.
As I said, I’m keeping score and poems that I really liked in the first half were written by 136 different poets!
The nine with best scores are (alphabetically) Angela Smith, Angela van Son (ProcrastinationCoach), Charlotte Hamrick, Emily Ramser, Jane Dougherty, Mary Beth Frezon, MD Kerr, Ming Liu and Nataša Božić Grojić. Out of 15 poems by each of you I loved 11 or 12. The best thing about it is that I only know Charlotte, all the others are new to me.
After you come ten with ten loved poems apiece but I couldn’t include them as well or the poem would be too long. One half to go! End results could be different!
Here is a list of all 35 poets with links to their poems from which I borrowed the lines. They are in the same order as above in the poem. The links lead either to their blogs or mine if the poems are translations from Slovenian (usually done by me) or to an external page with the poem in full:
- Erica Jong
- Srečko Kosovel
- Kajetan Kovič
- Ming Liu
- Jane Dougherty
- Lidija Dimkovska
- Duke Miller
- Aleš Mustar
- Matic Kovič, uncle (he takes familiar poems and rewrites them on the subject of beer, for example he tackled Byron and his Parisina)
- James Douglas Morrison (aka Jim)
- Patrick Jennings
- Nataša Božić Grojić
- Charles Bukowski
- Mary Beth Frezon
- Angela van Son
- Angela Smith
- Allen Ginsberg
- Emily Ramser
- Charlotte Hamrick
- MD Kerr
- Branko Maksimovič, father
- Miha Avanzo
- Oscar Wilde
- Boris A. Novak
- Dane Zajc
- Maggie from What Rhymes with Stanza?
- Bojana Stojcic
- Vitomil Zupan
- Kara Coryell
- Romana Iorga
- Tomaž Šalamun
- Meta Maksimovič, mother
- Christina Georgina Rossetti
- Susanne Fletcher
- Claudia McGill
Thank you and I love you all because you rock!
Here are some topical photos and then sleeep. It’s almost 4 am. What I give up for poetry! 😉
aw, jeez. you. ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤ Did you read your words on the screen? I remember this poem!
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Hi M.,
Yes, I read my words . . .Thanks for the kindness, people reading are like the other end of the telephone, otherwise we’re just talking into a dead line. Of course, technology has changed all the old images. Too bad since computers have little romance. The occasional blind date used to be special, now the internet offers them up by the thousands. Virtual sex is the big one. Pressing human emotions inside a chip and electrical circuit. I wonder about that one . . . I talk to the image, but it doesn’t matter. Truly. Thanks. Duke
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Well… Computers are just enablers. Technology is just a start. Virtual sex is just foreplay. What we read, and write, goes a long way and ripples.
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What a great compilation! (K)
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How I love this post! I’ll tell you more about it later, first have to bring my son to school.
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One of the things I loved first, is that I recognised lines I had read this month. Great to so lovely lines again in a new context! The second thing I like, is that you’ve taught me what a cento is (but now I’ll have to visit my blog and add a tag to some of my poems ;)). More later, I am going to enjoy your post all day…
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I must thank Ken Gierke for inspiring me to write a cento. Here is his wonderful one from some days ago (and I didn’t know what it was before reading his): https://rivrvlogr.wordpress.com/2019/04/10/it-feels-like-rain-cento/
I’m so happy to see your enthusiasm. ❤ This is my life in poetry, basically. With the nine of you as most recent additions. I'm glad that you remember some verses. They are worthy.
I wish you a great rest of April and beyond.
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So great to hear, Angela. 🙂 It’s just that I’m so grateful to all poets who have ever lifted me or made me feel, or think.
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Thank you, K! 🙂 This was fun to do. You’re among the next 10 with 10 poems that I loved which I had meant to include at first as well but was feeling it getting long as it was.
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Cento is so hard to do well. And it’s also easy to get distracted by all the wonderful poetry you are reading…
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Oh, this is true. I’ve been pretty distracted all April. Such luxury. 🙂
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This is impressive and a wonderful compilation. You made the styles mesh extremely well.
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Thank you, Barry. Had too much time on my hands and much fun with it. 🙂
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Awwwwwwwwwwww! Love you, Manja.
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❤ ❤ ❤ Much love right back, Charlotte!
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This is wonderful.
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Thank you, Robin! ❤
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Where would we be without poetry?
What a poetic post.
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Right, Bojana. It is indispensable. Thank you so much, also for your words. Does this poem exist online so that I can link to it? Or do you prefer it stays as it is now?
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It’s nice this way.
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This is fantastic Manja. I haven’t checked out some of the napowrimo poets you have mentioned. Will do now.
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Thank you so much, Punam! 🙂 Last year was my first NaPoWriMo and I barely read anybody else as I was too busy with my own poems. This year I said I’d read everything. 🙂
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You are welcome. I am trying to catch up.
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Cheers!
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Thank you for your words, Jane. 🙂 Cin cin right back.
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🙂
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=) Clever, and a delightful kudos you’ve offered. I am honoured to have words among this lovely collection of words.
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You’re most welcome, Patrick. Thank you for your words and pics, always.
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Lovely lovely lovely.
I particularly love the hopelessness weaved in those first seven lines. Beautifully done.
Thank you to for choosing to include a line from mine. Your comments this whole month have been greatly appreciated and have helped give me motivation to continue.
Happy writing!
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Thank you, Emily, for your words too! 🙂 I’m glad you like it. I might take a day off reading others but shall continue soon. Greetings from Tuscany!
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I like the back page of your Mum’s book, color-able 😊
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Thanks, SMSW. In fact, it’s colourable throughout, all illustrations are left in black and white on purpose. Ooooo I know!! You need this! TWO of them! 😉 We need to meet now… Or better when it’s in English, I suppose. 😀
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Italian would be ok but Slovenian a bit tough to decipher! 😁
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I need more than a day to enjoy them all! I’m not complaining, I’m looking forward to it 🙂
In the meanwhile I will also enjoy that I’m in a list with Bukowski, Ginsberg and Wilde. That’s a first 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
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One needs to start somewhere. 😉 Yeah, take it easy and take your time. The list is not going to run anywhere.
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I used to love to browse through people book closest as a way of getting to know them a bit better. This is such a lovely equivalent to that, we get to journey through your poetic loves!
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❤ True. All my blog functions in this way. I'm letting you get to know me. 🙂 I'm glad that you're interested.
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Cool! I missed this yesterday.
And words from other bloggers, – That’s great!
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Thank you, Ken, I’m glad that you had a look. Much work with these centos! But great fun and satisfaction. Not just bloggers, here is the entire history of my love of poetry.
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Thank you for including me. And I am just floored by this poem. You have got to be one of the most creative writers I know. You synthesize so much emotion, thoughts, life here, and it is in your voice. Despite starting with others’ words! I just love it. Wow.
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Thank you, Claudia, means so much. ❤ I found your poem just in time. It brought everything home and made me happy. This was quite a task. I obviously have too much time. 🙂
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No, you have the right amount of time and you spend it in the best way possible: your photos and words bring me and lots of others a lot of interest, happiness, and laughs. I hope you’ll be spending your time on this for a long time to come
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Thank you for saying this. 🙂 Makes it all seem so much more worthwhile.
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I liked this poem of curation very much. I love how people can swim in poetry in April – and all year round, too, I guess, but April is so very poetry-filled.
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Thank you, Sarah. 🙂 I love it too, and only did my first round of it last year. I came to see poetry as luxury. Many don’t have time to write and read poetry as much as they wish.
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Thank you so much, Manja. This is wondeful ❤ . Also, I love this poem, it works.
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You’re very welcome, Nataša. 🙂 Thank you for your words!
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I”m honored to be amongst the chosen. Thank you for the mention. Next year I will try to read more participants. This year, that’s just not going to happen.
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Oh, Maggie, understandably so, without proper internet connection. Makes one crazy! Thank you and you’re most welcome.
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You read well 😀
You write well, too.
And the slippers, well, they’re swell!
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Hahha, thanks, Joey. I wear them all the time. 😀
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What a fun idea, my dear M. Some of these lines are arresting and I just kept reading and loving each gem. Then, near the end I saw a line that looked awfully familiar and realized it was from one of my scribbles. I think my heart grew ten times its normal size. Thank you for that.
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Ahh, I love to make your heart grow, Susanne. ❤ Thank you for your words. It all came together just right.
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I have a mask
I don’t wear red lipstick
I have known positions
I have a sword
I have books
I have moved mountains but always put them back
I don’t have slippers
I would never do what Bukowski tells me
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Thank you, Bushboy, for adding your own honest contribution. I think he said lots of things straight and right, but you last line makes for a good last line in your little poem.
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Glad you enjoyed my words playing around with yours 🙂
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Well done. 🙂
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Ah, thank you so much, Equinoxio. 🙂 I’m glad you had a look at this one in particular.
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Fantastic… and BOOKS!
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Thank you so much, Stephen. 🙂 I love them, most obviously.
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Thanks again for including my line in your poem. You are so creative, Manja! You inspire me every day. (((Hugs)))
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Oh, Charlotte, this sounds so good. Thank you for saying this. It will help me when I’m ready to get desperate.
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I loved reading this. What a wonderful way to make a poem! I might try it too some time. Also, i adore the captions to your photos! 😀 The Keeper of the Word, ha ha! Bukowski often makes me do things too. Also, very nice slippers!!
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